Do you know Hrithik Roshan lent his voice for a song in Kites, and that the music album releases tomorrow ?
Yeah well, I too don’t care. But look at this sentence :
The 36-year-old actor’s debut song, Kites in the Sky, composed music by Rajesh Roshan would be released tomorrow along with other songs of the film.
There are many things wrong with it. First, ‘composed music by Rajesh Roshan’ — plain wrong. And then, my pet peeve : ‘Would be released’. The article is attributed to PTI, which makes it worse. I would expect a respected news organization to know the difference between ‘will’ and ‘would’.
From my limited understanding, ‘would’ is used to denote a possible event. The possibility is usually implied or stated explicitly. Will, on the other hand, is for a certainty. So I ‘will’ go to work tomorrow but I ‘would’ not go to work tomorrow. I might be missing corner cases, but you get the gist.
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Since we are at this topic, there is another pair — shall and will. If you don’t know the exact difference between the two, I’d strongly recommend sticking to will. The world doesn’t come crashing down if ‘shall’ isn’t used at all, but it might if ‘shall’ is overused instead of ‘will’.
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Now I don’t think of myself as a suicide bomber for the Grammar Taliban, and I clearly know when I care about semantics and language. Language, for me, remains a mode of communication. Further, not everyone was fortunate to have English as their first language or even study English. It’s not funny just to hear someone speak in broken English. I find it morally incorrect to take note of errors in such cases. But when a person is writing a book, an article, a news piece for the PTI, I don’t think it is incorrect to expect them to know the basics — because they are asking for their writing to be judged.
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All that being said, I am sure I make mistakes too. In case you see errors at this blog, you must write back with comments.

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March 28, 2010 at 9:50 pm
maverickshree
Very good observation and correction as well
March 29, 2010 at 3:44 am
Suchithra
On “shall” and “will”… I have heard of people who replace “shall” with “will” in sentences like “Shall I help you with this?”
In such a case, “will” sounds plain silly to me… (I feel like retorting- only u can tell whether u “will” help me or not!)
So always using “will” to remain on the safe side can cause errors like this…
March 29, 2010 at 5:01 am
ARUNAA ERANDE
Deepak is absolutely right about will and would. Many people make that mistake. as Deepak says, not their fault! they were not taught properly.
Suchitra- actually, instead of asking Shall I help you?, you should ask –’May I help you?’
March 29, 2010 at 6:10 am
Deepak Iyer
@Suchithra : Of course, there are corner cases. English always manages to find exceptions. BTW, I’d cringe if someone asked, Shall I help you. May if probably technically correct, but the safest bet is Can. It might not be the best word, but it is safe for a question, just like Will is for a statement.
March 29, 2010 at 10:46 am
Zuber
Here you go, right here in this post
“There are so many things wrong it. “
March 29, 2010 at 10:52 am
Deepak Iyer
@Zuber : Thanks.
Just FYI, I don’t proof-read [:)]
March 30, 2010 at 7:11 am
Vijay
Nice blog here.
Coming to this post – them (plural pronoun) is used to refer to “a person”.
Anyways, you have already answered – you don’t proof read.
April 7, 2010 at 1:50 pm
Yogesh
I *will* let you know about any errors that I might find in your posts.